Question
Foraging at all times of the day and night, but interspersing their feeding with periods of rest that last between one and eight hours, a sperm whale could eat so much as a ton of squid a day.
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Option B
Option C
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Option E
(This question is from Official Guide. Therefore, because of copyrights, the complete question cannot be copied here. The question can be accessed at GMAT Club)
Solution
Sentence Analysis
The sentence starts with two verb-ing modifiers — the second one containing a relative clause. The sentence structure is:
- Foraging at all times of the day and night, (First verb-ing modifier for the subject “a whale”. The whale forages at all times)
- but interspersing their feeding with periods of rest (Second verb-ing modifier for the subject “whale”. The whales — it has to be “whales”, not “whale” since the sentence uses plural pronoun “their” in the non-underlined part — intersperse their feeding with the periods of the rest.)
- that last between one and eight hours, (relative clause modifying “periods of rest”. These periods last between one and eight hours)
- a sperm whale could eat so much as a ton of squid a day. (Main clause. Subject – a sperm whale; verb – could eat. The sperm whales can eat as much as a ton of squid a day)
The original sentence has the following errors:
- We need to use plural subject “sperm whales” to match with the plural pronoun “their” in the non-underlined part.
- The use of “could” doesn’t seem correct. When we use “could” in the present tense, it indicates possibility, not ability. For example: “this table can withstand 100 kgs” says that the table has the capacity to withstand a certain weight. On the other hand, “this table could withstand 100 kgs” means that that there is a possibility that the table will withstand 100 kgs. Here, within the context, it looks more reasonable to say that we are talking about the capacity or the ability of the whales. Thus, the use of ‘can’ is preferred.
- The idiom “so much as …” is only used in negative contexts i.e. when we have “not so much as…”. For positive comparisons “as much as…” is used. Please note that “as much as…” is also used in negative comparisons i.e. “not as much as…” is also correct.
Option Analysis
(A) Incorrect. For the reasons explained above.
(B) Correct. All the errors of the original sentence have been corrected without introducing any new errors.
(C) Incorrect. Error no. 2 of the original sentence. The use “between X to Y” is incorrect. The correct idiom is “between X and Y”.
(D) Incorrect. Error no. 2 and 3 of the original sentence.
(E) Incorrect. Error no. 1 and 3 of the original sentence.
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You mentioned that “The use of “could” is incorrect. We are neither talking about a hypothetical scenario nor talking about the PAST.”
I thought could is generally used for a hypothetical event only. Please could you give an example that highlights the usage of “could” for a past event?
Usage of So much as – Please could you tell me which of the following is correct?
(1) He doesn’t drink so much as his wife does
(2) He doesn’t drink as much as his wife does
Do they both convey the same meaning?
In the past, I could run for 10 km at a stretch.
Is this sentence correct?
Both the sentences you presented are correct and have the same meaning.
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