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Researchers now regard interferon as not a single substance, but it is rather a biological family of complex molecules that play an important, though not entirely defined, role in the immune system.

Option A
Option B
Option C
Option D
Option E

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Solution

Sentence Analysis

  • Researchers now regard interferon as (Main Subject: Researchers; Main Verb: regard)
    • not a single substance, (First element of the list)
    • but it is rather a biological family of complex molecules (Second element of the list)
      • that play an important, though not entirely defined, role in the immune system. (Dependent clause modifying ‘molecules’ – Subject: that; Verb: play)

The sentence talks about what researchers regard interferon as and what researchers do not regard interferon as. The researchers do not regard interferon as a single substance; they regard interferon as a biological family of complex molecules. These molecules play an important but not entirely defined role in the immune system.

The sentence has two issues:

  1. Deterministic parallelism error: By replacing the list with individual elements, we get the following two structures:
    1. Researchers now regard interferon as a single substance (Makes sense)
    2. Researchers now regard interferon as it is rather a biological family of complex molecules (Doesn’t make sense)

Since the second structure doesn’t make sense, the list is incorrect.

  1. Even though the construction ‘regard X as not Y but Z” is parallel, it is generally not used. The better construction is ‘regard X not as Y but as Z’.

Option Analysis

(A) Incorrect. For the reasons mentioned above.

(B) Incorrect. This option also has a parallelism error. When we replace the list with the second element, we’ll get two ‘as’. The structure will be ‘as as a biological family’. 

(C) Correct.

(D) Incorrect. For the following reasons:

  1. ‘Regard…to be’ is only used in the form ‘X is regarded to be Y’, not ‘A regards X to be Y’. Therefore, in this sentence, ‘regard…to be’ is incorrect.
  2. Even if we replace ‘to be’ with ‘as’, the sentence will incorrect since there is no ‘as’ after ‘but’.

(E) Incorrect. The use of ‘being’ distorts the meaning since it seems to indicate a temporary state – as if interferon is regarded as being a biological family for a temporary time frame. The use of ‘instead’ is also redundant.

If you have any doubts regarding any part of this solution, please feel free to ask in the comments section.

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8 Comments

    1. When we search “but rather” or “but instead” on WSJ.com, we get more than 8K results, clearly indicating that these uses are fine. Check out this link and this link.

  1. Just a doubt ..
    A biological family of complex molecules that play…..

    Here that refers a family…
    Or molecules..how ?
    More logical to say..
    It is family of molecules that plays…agsin

  2. Is the meaning of ‘playing’ and ‘that play’ the same? Or is ‘playing’ modifying ‘a biological family’ and ‘that play’ is modifying ‘complex molecules’? Many thanks!

    1. “playing” can modify either – “a biological family” or “complex molecules”. However, “that play” has a plural verb “play” and thus modifies only “complex molecules”. If we make it “that plays”, it’ll then modify only “a biological family”.

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